Reviews for Shots In The Night redone

healed.scars 2006-10-08 ch 1,	hey, nice work with the redoing it......establishing good detachment towards the end, giving us two sides to the story.
criti-sized 2006-04-09 ch 1,	Wow,that was great,I enjoyed it alot.It was close to another book I read on FictionPress where the guy killed his wife called Meaningful Revenge by Ill-lusioned.I also didn't see any mistakes axcept for when you missed a G in the word attending when you wrote about the school he went to.Again I liked the short story,you got my applause for this.
Lupel 2006-03-25 ch 1,	That was an amazing story. You said you needed editing advice, and I only caught one thing. You left out the g in attending when you were describing Mark Davies towards the end. This was written well. I love reading your stories! Keep writing!