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| soft-spoken 2007-05-15 ch 1,   | I liked the tone you've created, although I'm not a fan of the ending, maybe because I'm ignorant and I'm not sure what you mean. Nonetheless the ending aside, it was good. Good work, -N |
| Mei-Mei the SciFi Junkie 2006-03-24 ch 1, | great opening line ^_^ i like this one |