Absoultely-feaking-BEAUTIFUL. This is so many simple, perfect truths, and all delivered with wonderfully worded lines.

My 'it is': It's the way I'd rather be sad and feel deeply, than be happy and feel nothing at all.

Stunning poem; definitely keep writing,
Promised Sword

I loved this. I loved how it was so long...it reminded me of myself. I just can go on and on forever about nothing in particular. That's us: random and rambling teenagers. Whoo! Anyway, this was adorable. Really describes us teenagers so well. It's so true, and not necessarily to the point (which is a metaphor for us, I think), but I think it is something everyone can relate to. My favorite lines, I think, were "It's the way your eyes make good windows" Now, I am not a **, but I think everyone can relate to this. I mean, I like it better when people can't see my eyes because I can roll my eyes freely without being scolded for it, you know? Oh, you probably don't, it's probably just me. And also: And ** up your dance routine/ Because your partner is hot and hormones suck". Ha ha, gotta love those teenager years right? That was really cute...I know exactly what you mean! But, whatever, now I'm rambling (see? It should be trademarked by teenagers around the world...). ANYWAY, my "it is...":

It is having the need to say everything, but not knowing how to say it.

Does that make sense? Whatever, if you can figure it out, congrats. OKAY then, really wonderful job. Loved loved loved loved it!

IT IS STUNNING. Gorgeous. I love love love love love it. Because it is SOO TRUE. especially applicable to me:"It’s how I want to fix the whole worldBut just can’t"

You managed to retain my attention throughout the whole thing. Perfectly relateable. I enjoyed every line (split up perfectly). My mind always especially focussed on the lines that didn't start with "It's" this is awesome. immediate favourite.

keep it up & write on,

-Em

WOW. I love it. This is absolutely amazing. It's such a window into your soul. I love it. I can agree on so so so much of it. Ahh I love this piece. I first saw it was like "man this is long" but then it wasn't that long after all. I got so into it, I was shocked that it was over. And by the way, here's my "it is:"

"It's the way I say 'I hate you' when I'm really trying to confess how much I love you."

I just love this poem. I don't think I can say it enough. Absolutely marvelous, babe. I LURV it.

"The language beneath the language: This is poetry." Andrea Pacione. So please accept this challenge to take this simple piece of empty words and make it more. Compared to most on this site, yes, this piece is phenomenal. And I am sure you will get many more reviews telling you so. Now condense...find a few words that speak the world. Variety. Emotion. A challenge to let this piece become more free. Wonderful write, keep writing.