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| In State of Agony 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuse"Picture the blood that rushed to my face when a few minutes later,you asked me if I was okay"i can related with this piece, i specially like this part...u achieve a nice flow, god job this world is (In State Of Agony) |
| Lovetress 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseAww. The ending was so sad. However, I do feel that you could've added more details/lines to the poem to make it stronger. |
| Needa S 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseMake me cry, why don't ya. This is so touching. Very emotional. Excellent write. |
| Matet 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abuseaww, that's so sad. ::hugs:: you'll be okay. |