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Reviews For: Knife in My Heart

In State of Agony
2006-04-18
ch 1,
abuse"Picture the blood that rushed to my face when a few minutes later,you asked me if I was okay"i can related with this piece, i specially like this part...u achieve a nice flow, god job

this world is (In State Of Agony)
Lovetress
2006-04-10
ch 1,
abuseAww. The ending was so sad. However, I do feel that you could've added more details/lines to the poem to make it stronger.
Needa S
2006-04-01
ch 1,
abuseMake me cry, why don't ya. This is so touching. Very emotional. Excellent write.
Matet
2006-03-25
ch 1,
abuseaww, that's so sad. ::hugs:: you'll be okay.
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