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Napris 2008-07-29 ch 1,	Very good. It's difficult for me to compliment a poem/poetry/prose, because it seems funny to describe its excellence with words and adjectives. Just to let you know ... I liked it. A lot. It sounded like a secret without a story ... but it must have been a nice., the vivid dream you had.
Sillyscrat 2007-06-09 ch 1,	This is so cool, it feels like I'm there. It flows so well and I feel like I'm flying when I'm reading it (does that make sense?) Pretty.
Simple Confusion 2006-10-08 ch 1,	excellent poem. i loved the rhythm and just the way it flows. the only like that i didn't really like was the "or just dimming light bulbs because..." it just seemed to be a little bit too long, maybe if you cut it down a little. otherwise, awesome job.
Dust Cloud 2006-07-14 ch 1,	Didn't really get it...but okay, whatever.
Mia Bailey 2006-04-04 ch 1,	Ooh. (They'd better not delete my extra vowels again.) So very avant-garde. (Spelling...?) Why is half this review in parentheses? (Don't know.) Enjoyable.
ARZ 2006-03-27 ch 1,	Cool. I likey. V. expressive.
Respect Is Sexy 2006-03-25 ch 1,	What the fluff? I'm so insanely jealous of you. You can write poetry. You have no idea how much I wish I could write poetry... Um. Good poem. Made absolutely no sense. But if it was based on a dream, that could be why...Things that are based on dreams tend to be......well, Charisse's dreams are based on my dreams. Enough said.
Chocolate Herrings 2006-03-25 ch 1,	I really like this. I really really like this...and I'm not sure why. I loved the line: "somebody’s mother called and one by one they vanished into the chaos, like gazelles (emo kids of the savannah)" Sounds like a cool dream. Kinda makes me want to eat pizza.
Face 2006-03-25 ch 1,	Gorgeous, as always. Melancholy, slightly quirky ("gazelles (emo kids of the savannah)" appealed greatly), beatiful.
C. X. Blackfeather 2006-03-25 ch 1,	Wo... That was so poetic... The images stick in my head and, because of the way you described them, so does the wording. That's very awesome. I've got this slow-motion going on, a sort of detachedness that really fits well for recalling dreams. =yay.
hey maria 2006-03-25 ch 1,	By the time I finished reading it, I'd almost forgotten it was a dream, it sounds so real. There are details in this I never would have noticed in any dream. It's beautiful (no matter how cliche that sounds.)
Band Geek17 2006-03-25 ch 1,	Very cool. You write down your dreams as well? Dreams never cease to fascinate me, so of course I absolutely love this! You know, everyone has ways of interpreting dreams... they have little dream books, symbols that prove certain things... but really, you are the only one who could possibly interpret your dreams. Symbols mean certain things to you personally - they might be completely different to me. So here a reader sits, enjoying a piece of a writer's mind that even the author doesn't fully understand... I can try to interpret, but mostly, I'll just enjoy the ride. Translation? Really, really cool piece.
Orient Fox 2006-03-25 ch 1,	wow, that is a pretty strange dream, but it sounds pretty cool too at the same time! there's so much symbolism that one can tye into that dream, such as how the red boy is the one that relates to love and happiness and the dark one, yes, it totally relates to ink and writing (yay!!) and the gold one might have to do with...um, well, money/wealth/sunshine? (scratch the sunshine part, i think i'm really hyper...ohmygosh, i have a violin contest thingie to go to today. very nervous...ah! omg, wish me luck! and i got ur email, but i have to write a reply!! i'll be getting that done before school gets out - i hope! jesu christo, i've gotten so much homework this year!) anyways, this was a very interesting bit, and, wow, i wish my dreams were this interesting! orientfox
The Melissa Occult 2006-03-24 ch 1,	-wants pizza really bad-you reminded me that I want some pizza. You didn't alert me to the fact because the hidden part of my brain already knew, it just had to be reminded. thank you for enlightening the waking side of me, every little bit helps. I wrote a dream story too, I have it posted, I forget what it's called. It's about Nazis though (Whats the plural of nazi?). read it if you have some time, but it's not going to blow up the world if you don't (though that would be a hell of a lot of fun!) I want to live through the apocalypse. I think it'd be cool. I like dante's 'inferno', it comforts me. by the way, I liked your prose piece, dreams are fascinating. just the garbled bleebs that sometimes become a story and sometimes stay as barbled gleebs. good night, message in a bottle,all it said was,"I'm lonly (sic) too" EIB

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