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you'll see
2007-06-19
ch 21,
Her first thoughts with a hungry Sierge is for school, not being in the woods at night with him?
What did Lucas's cat eat? Who are Luther and the cheerleader whose name I don't remember? Why did Lucas change back?
MorganTW
2007-05-07
ch 20,
Great Chapter, and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in quite sometime, I haven't been using this pen name quite so much. Anyway, I do love this story and I hope you update soon! Ciao x
Beth-chan
2006-11-28
ch 13,
^0^ SQUISHY! *flails*

Poor Lucas. The ATM machine of Bloomfield.

"He was slumped over on the table, using his arms as a pillow, sleeping. And drooling."

For some reason, I found this line funny. Maybe because it's just a very Lucas-like position.

Uh-oh. o.o His ears have been revealed. What will happen next? The suspense is killing me!! *overdramatic*
Beth-chan
2006-11-20
ch 12,
;_; KITTY! *beats Sierge for giving into his primal instincts*

"Not thinking properly, I threw the limp figure, attempting to get it over the wooden fence so she wouldn’t see. I watched as it got stuck in one of the trees that helped divide the property."

... Although that line was funny for some reason.

I'm guessing 'merde' means... a bad word or something in French. :o

*hates mirrors* >< Bad experience with a funhouse...
Beth-chan
2006-11-20
ch 11,
Ah, the joy of babysitting. x.x

And kids are actually somewhat more in-tune with the paranormal than adults. I think it has something to do with them just being young and having such wide imaginations. *shrug* Something like that.

"Lucas exited via front door."

*wonders why she finds this funny* ^^ It would have been funnier if he had exited via plot hole...

"Hey, we live in a small town. The only thing we have here is a Dairy Queen."

Actually we live in a VILLAGE with a Dairy Queen. >> *glares at the mindless Wal-Mart representative who said that*

Nice, easy-going chapter. Nothing real dramatic happening, but it gives us an insight to the characters' lives and what they do in their free time. Except for Lucas, who seems to have nothing more to do than visit people at their jobs. XD; And you DON'T want to get attacked by the head librarian...
Beth-chan
2006-11-20
ch 10,
"If looks could kill…I’d have murdered practically the whole world in the span of my lifetime…"

XD We've said that many times~

... Lucas has a truck? o.o Uh-oh.

“Don’t defile the holy compact disk player.”

*bows before it* We are not worthy!

This chapter seemed more like a filler chapter to me. I think you probably could have combined it with the next chapter. Nothing really... happened. ^^; But I did like it because it was funny. And maybe soon we'll find out who Luther is!

{And you're, like, right down the hall from me, but... ^^}
Beth-chan
2006-11-19
ch 9,
Woo! Another exciting chapter~ I like the name Jezerille. It seems so... original. ^^

"I was amazed at all the new students we were acquiring in Bloomfield. Of all the places to come to."

Amen, brother! Preach it!

... So there are people who aren't Infected but have powers too? o.o; What a twist.

But why is she calling Sierge 'Luther'? o_O; Was it his name in a past life? ...XD; Just a theory. I'll read the next chapter after school tomorrow!
Beth-chan
2006-11-14
ch 8,
^_^ Paige-chan~ *flails*

I love your story. I really do. Sierge is my favorite character, and he looks just how you drew him. ^^ Lucas seems really protective of Renée. Maybe there's something there, nya~?

I've only read up to chapter eight so far, but be assured I will read the rest! ^^ See you!
DeLayNee
2006-11-12
ch 20,
So, is Jez not infected, or was she just feeding them crap when they stopped time?

“I don’t wanna be a salmon!”
-haha!
MorganTW
2006-10-19
ch 19,
Weird, short chapter! But I wish to read much more! More More More! Update soon please :)
DeLayNee
2006-10-18
ch 19,
so when r we going to get down to where the powers are coming from?
MorganTW
2006-10-01
ch 18,
What a weird chapter, but it was interesting as always! Not completely understanding the clothes and the scratching post bit, but whatever...maybe I'm just slow.

Anyway, I hope you update soon :)

Cya!
MorganTW
2006-08-27
ch 17,
Hahaha! Ooh I love Sierge! Even if he is being kind of out of order! Lol. I feel sorry for Lucas...and I love Kumiko! This is really good! I can't wait to see if Renee finds out what has happened. Keep it up!

Update soonish!

Ciao!
DeLayNee
2006-08-26
ch 17,
So... he's not gonna tell her that it;s Lucas? and is there going to be more plot bunnies soon?
MorganTW
2006-08-21
ch 16,
Yay! You updated and with another great chapter! The cat speaking is a bit odd though, why didn't the other cat Sierge ate speak? Amyway, Lol. Whatever. I liked this chapter and the fact that Lucas looks more or less human at the end of it...I wonder how long he will stay like that.

Update soon though! I need more!

Cya!
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