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| Damaged 2006-03-24 ch 1,   | Reading this piece of literature absolutely broke my heart. I only hope the message written between the proverbial lines isn't based on actual experiences of you, dominochic. If it is, I only pray that you recover from you deep hurt. I pose the argument that people WOULD notice if you "permanently exterminate[d]" yourself. Your family would. Your friends would (and you DO have them, even if it isn't apparent). Maybe the guy written about wouldn't, but he doesn't sound like such a catch, if you get my drift. "But I've been usedAnd I have to stayNo one else will want me now" I also pose argument for this stanza. The person who wouldn't want you for something that has happened, which you openly admit as a mistake, isn't a catch either. The people who reject you for 'being used' are shallow and hypocritical -- not very nice qualities if I may say so myself. THEY pose the greater wrong because they would be refusing to FORGIVE you. "Please someone, tell me you need meTell me I'm wanted and lovedThat I'm worth something" If I convey anything in this review, I hope I portray that I DO care about you. Your words are beautiful, as well as your spirt. YOU ARE A BEAUTIFUL PERSON! Don't EVER let someone say otherwise. You ARE wanted and ARE loved. You ARE worth -- and much more than just "something". You are worth EVERYTHING. If you need to talk --ABOUT ANYTHING-- you have my email address. Don't hesitate to cry on my shoulders, my friend. I'm here for you. ~~Katrina~~ (a.k.a. Damaged) |