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Reviews For: Undertow

azure ray 2006-08-17 ch 1,	All of your reviewers said it. You have your own style. I have never read anything like this. It is absolutely beautiful. Every single piece of it was so well thought out. Impressive. I really enjoyed it. The line, "He talks to you with his eyes, but you are not the only one he graces with his speech."...Golden. Pure genius. I think my favorite, though was the opening bit. Something about it... eery. Incredibly powerful.
special 2006-06-29 ch 1,	woah...that was awesome..very very interesting style. "Your name is nowhere to be found. It doesn’t matter because you love this place… And will never scar it with your name." That was a very "woahh" line..=) "Watch. Don’t look."I LOVED that..wonderful ending to unique rambling. Lovely. ;)allie
Katalystic 2006-05-29 ch 1,	Hey there!Guess who =]Yes, I've decided to go for a new account .. all my old stuff .. it, er, bothered me.Anyways, I'd just like to mention that, well, this is amazing. I know I say that a lot, but believe me, you've come quite the way and this is just a great proof thereof. Keep it up my talented friend, and take care !
Written 2006-03-31 ch 1,	Oh, awesome. I was having an odd day and this really spoke to me. You certainly have your own style, and I love how the line between poetry and prose is blurred. Really, awesome.
maggie 2006-03-29 ch 1,	simply put, you amaze me. seriously. thanks for the therapy.
Lavender L. C 2006-03-25 ch 1,	This was interesting, never read anything quite like it. You have your own personal style, and that's awesome! Keep it up! ;)

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