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| pocket.mouse.poppet 2006-07-22 ch 5, | Yay! I love chocolate... But in Aus we have Cadbury's, and I don't think we have Hershey's... We might... And wherever you are might have Cadbury's... You might even be in Aus... Whatever. Chocolate is still the best thing in the whole wide world, and therefore the ode to chocolate is still valid... I think I just confused myself... Oh well. Shinies To All! |
| pocket.mouse.poppet 2006-07-22 ch 2, | This made me laugh... The title and everything else. It makes me think of girly slumber parties, because people always end up on a sugar-high and therefore almost as completely random as this poem. Shinies To All! |
| Ryan Schiff 2006-06-29 ch 1, | Ironicly, a very average poem, and not a bunch. Sorry, couldn't resist the sarcasm. I'll answer your question. It is an easy task. I've actualy answered your question over 70 times on this website and hundreds of times throughout my short life. Every poem is, beyond an attempt to express an emotion or narate an event, is a step closer, or prehaps another complex part of, the answer to this question. What is poetry? The thoughts of every generation of poets. All in all, this poem is, just as I said, average. It works, as a whole, but the whole is merely the sum of the parts, and the parts are only so-so. The prase I find myself saying the most on this website is "Show, don't tell". It takes years before that really sinks in and you can figure out how to show instead of telling, but once you do... |