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| Lady of Secrets 2007-12-01 ch 1,  | abusethis is one of those poems that i hafta reread twice. its not that bad, but really that good. U manage to put in so many different meanings until so little words that its awe-inspiring. u have talent; im glad ur using it. may grace b with u |
| Tytherpol 2007-03-24 ch 1, | abuseWhoah. Awesome. This is really good. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseLove the title, although I feel the subject of the poem could be more coherently expressed. THe title says it all, so take the poem to the next level! :) |
| faerie-gumdrops 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseAnother great poem! This one got me thinking a lot. I loved the first line of this - really attention-grabbing. Yeah, I suppoose all movies can be comedies - I do certainly laugh at some weird ones. Loved the line about coincidence not being real too. |
| Pink Sparrow 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseoh wow... It's really great. I've never read a poem on something liek this before. THe authors note really adds to the poem. The whole thing flows beautifully. Nice work. |
| poet tree 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseagain, impressive i think i've already mentioned this, but your a.a.'s add to the poetry quite a bit. as for the whole 'author aquified' thing...my initials are a.n., so when i first saw it used i was extremely confused. ha ha. |
| Ellerfru 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseOne of the most interesting first lines I've ever seen in a poem... (Haha, review battle, nice way of putting it) |
| saccharine lust aerial 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseyour words made little cuts and fires deep, all over my skin. wonderful... |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abusewow...truly amazing...you leave me speechless and full of thought at the same time...if that made any sense...keep it up.--pammy- x3 |
| elvenstorm 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseLike your authors note, that could have been good included into the poem at some point! Anyway the poem itself is a lovely idea and has a haunting feel to it. Love the bit in breackets at the end as well, especially the way it feels kind of like an afterthought. Well done. |
| Jezsh 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseI like the idea behind this. I think it's true that everything is comical viewed in a certain light. Aidan Chambers recognised something similar in his book...think it's called the Pillowbook of Cordelia Kenn. I think if we lose the ability to laugh at anything in the right context, then we're done for.Anyway it's nicely written. Don't understand the large gap but each to their own. Simple but hiding depth. |
| Sunami Silverblade 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseHeh. I love the bitterness here... not blunt, just... subtle. Honest. Very true. |
| Ellin Louise 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abusevery interesting poem. well written, leaves the read with a bit to think about. |
| lackluster 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abusei love your summaries. i like the idea you're trying to portray here. truthful. |
| Seraph Strike 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abuseAnything I had to say has already been covered. Delightful job, this is my favorite one of your works I've read so far. |