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| CostumeForAGutterball 2007-02-21 ch 1, | wow-imagery is quite stunning! great poem--thanks for inspiring me! |
| Res Ipsa 2006-05-10 ch 1, | "rained like a drama queen" is great imagery. the "&" is creative- makes me want to write. :) |
| braindead1345 2006-04-08 ch 1, | i really like this... uninice(i cant spell) |
| ancient trees 2006-03-30 ch 1, | Absolute WOW. I'm stunned, this is, I think , my favourite of everything that I've ever read of yours. This just blows me away entirely...I don't really know what to say anymore besides...wow...again... |
| okay valentine 2006-03-25 ch 1, | goregous. love, val |
| Coloured Raindrops 2006-03-25 ch 1, | Beautifulbeautiful descriptions. |
| verifyme 2006-03-25 ch 1, | I really liked this, it's just wonderful. Nothing wrong with it whatsoever. |
| perdita's kiss 2006-03-25 ch 1, | wow...I think this is my favorite piece you've ever written. |
| katt's got your tongue 2006-03-25 ch 1, | i absolutely love the second stanza, but the whole poem is awesome. good job |
| SliversofSilverPain 2006-03-25 ch 1, | wow. Well written. I like the formatting and the imagery. Nice concept also. |
| deathtotal9 2006-03-24 ch 1, | I really liked the use of the & sign at the beginning of each stanza. Interesting imagery as well. |