You've done it again...I'm not quite sure how you're able to display such talent in the written word...My mind is enveloped by obscurity...such a beautiful opening line. Your poems display such vivid images, and it abosultely forces the reader to think about it afterward. I've read alot of authors on here, and you are by far one of the most provokative. Please continue to write...

dark and morbid. I liked it! Nice use of imagery, and formatting