wow, first of all i'm really really used to this kinda theme, even if in "Frozen" i was trying to search a pseudo-reason to life and death but without really wanting an answer or an end. But i find this lyrics very strong, we feel there's something even though we're not sure of what it is, it makes us think about what it might be without really knowing what we're looking for ; i like this kinda stuff, complicated to understand since some of my songs are hard to understand even for me ; the way it describes an idea you don't really unveil, this is a nice style. keep wrinting like this

A thought provoking piece. Again your words flow out like a song, and your word choice could not be any more selective. I particurally like the line, "Crawling beneath the shadows of fear". Such a vivid picture, and what personification. Unbelievable...all of your poems flow perfectly like verses in a song... Keep it up.

P.S. I have a poem that i have written that you might like, entitled, "Reflections." seems to be your type of subject and literature. Read it I believe that you will like it.

Good poem - I like the feeling of hollowness you express in words and also as a backdrop, unspoken sort of thing. Keep writing.