Once again, really good. I like the emotion here...almost sad, almost...I dunno. It's hard to put into words.

That's deep. I like it! :)Becky

I like how it's told from someone elses point of view instead of the girls - we see too many of them.I bet if you ask a group of 50 girls, most would want to be like that...

I love it. It's nice to see a person acknowledge the inner pains that most people are too superficial to see. Good job!

Mm...I wouldn't be one to fantasise, but great imagery and rhythm :-D

I liked how instead of telling it from the girl's pov with the cliche topic of "I'm hiding behind a mask, I never show the real me", you instead took it from her admirer's pov. Well done.