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| shukuchi 2006-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuse... wow. That started out so funny, but got so sad... Incredible last sentance, by the way. And there were a million memorable and lovable quotes in there, yay! But wow... |
| susan 2006-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abusewow that was really interesting. though a bit confusing in some parts like the men necks...um...i just didnt understand the answer. what about land mines or other things of that sort? well g2gbye |
| ed 2006-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseheey, WOW this is realy good!i have been showing different people it and all i have gotten back is positive! even my english teacher!i have found you another fan! he is one of my better friends, he loves your work!i lov your work! XDed - master techie |
| DCXX 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abuseInteresting twist of things... |
| deathtotal9 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abuseOriginal idea, I like it. |