I don't realy like the layout but this poem suites this kind of layout,So thats good...:)The poem, i can kind of relate to in some fields...All in All it is fab...

i like this, it is short, but it says so much!

It's pretty good-I especially like how you summed up the whole poem in that last line, "suddenly became a lifetime"Keep writing-*adds to favorites. Onto to read some of your other writing.