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| pieces 2006-11-13 ch 1,   | This feels as if it could have been a stream of consciousness piece, but little things like, "dressed earnestly in black" and the "not quite squalid" loft make me think this couldn't have been accidental. It was wonderful. I like that the profound something wasn't ever attempted, only referred to. Very chic. I dig it mucho. |