| Reviews for heart words |
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the.pink.life 5/15/06 . chapter 1I LOVE that 3rd stanza. Stunning imagery, and it totally makes me want to go back to summer as a kid. I've been thinking about that period of my life a lot lately, so when I see stuff like this come up, I just fall in love. Great work. Keep writing! :) |
lackluster 3/31/06 . chapter 1the last line sums it up well. it's almost like a vague story. very very vague, but i like that. |
chaos called creation 3/26/06 . chapter 1'once, I was joy.I was love.' this makes me want to shake the boy next to me and go 'LOVE ME.' |
Ajna 3/26/06 . chapter 1Beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it. :) |
in theory 3/25/06 . chapter 1(Pink dandy lion is a favourite of mine too) I'm in love with your use of "frution;" so fantastically unexpected but appropriate. And the final stanza is streaming with imagery, fabulous. |