|Reviews for heart words|
| the.pink.life 5/15/06 . chapter 1
I LOVE that 3rd stanza. Stunning imagery, and it totally makes me want to go back to summer as a kid. I've been thinking about that period of my life a lot lately, so when I see stuff like this come up, I just fall in love. Great work. Keep writing! :)
| lackluster 3/31/06 . chapter 1
the last line sums it up well. it's almost like a vague story. very very vague, but i like that.
| chaos called creation 3/26/06 . chapter 1
'once, I was joy.I was love.'
this makes me want to shake the boy next to me and go 'LOVE ME.'
| Ajna 3/26/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it. :)
| in theory 3/25/06 . chapter 1
(Pink dandy lion is a favourite of mine too) I'm in love with your use of "frution;" so fantastically unexpected but appropriate. And the final stanza is streaming with imagery, fabulous.