|Reviews for The Roommate x closedfinishedediting X|
| liquid-dreams-139 3/28/06 . chapter 4
aw its so sweet! seriously u better update quick! and ur choice of making it a romance erotica story was great! update sonn!
| Hate In The Form Of Passion 3/26/06 . chapter 3
No doors! M! Naughty! Update soon I luff this story!
| Hate In The Form Of Passion 3/26/06 . chapter 2
SHORT! EVIL! MORE MORE MORE!
| Hate In The Form Of Passion 3/26/06 . chapter 1
WOAH! BALL PLAY! M! Hot! Aww. He wanted a serious relationship. How un-top of him and very uh..uke-ish.
| slinkytool34629 3/26/06 . chapter 3
hot hot hot hot hot! Everything about this story is just hot. I mean, there's really no way to describe it! I love the shower scenes too. Please continue!
| Jayn 3/26/06 . chapter 3
Good story. Please update!
| liquid-dreams-139 3/26/06 . chapter 2
hey i like it dude please update! its interesting i wanna know more!
| lilmissempty 3/26/06 . chapter 2
This is off to a great start. I can't wait to see what happens with them.
| Limited Edition 3/25/06 . chapter 1
Eh! The ending was really really vocab is good. Some mistakes here and there, nothing major. Awesome descriptions. I vote for posting the next chap!
| Ben Wuest 3/25/06 . chapter 1
Message: Ok, so I'm not going to lie. That was really, really hott. One of those 'hottest things ever'. You're really good at this, I hope for an update soon, lol.
Rating: 3/5Comments: It was hott, yes, but there were several grammatical errors, which is a big deal to me. I will continue to read on this if you keep updating, but you should really look over your work before posting next time, ok?