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   liquid-dreams-139 3/28/06 . chapter 4aw its so sweet! seriously u better update quick! and ur choice of making it a romance erotica story was great! update sonn! |
| Hate In The Form Of Passion 3/26/06 . chapter 3 No doors! M! Naughty! Update soon I luff this story! |
| Hate In The Form Of Passion 3/26/06 . chapter 2 SHORT! EVIL! MORE MORE MORE! |
| Hate In The Form Of Passion 3/26/06 . chapter 1 WOAH! BALL PLAY! M! Hot! Aww. He wanted a serious relationship. How un-top of him and very uh..uke-ish. |
| slinkytool34629 3/26/06 . chapter 3 hot hot hot hot hot! Everything about this story is just hot. I mean, there's really no way to describe it! I love the shower scenes too. Please continue! |
| Jayn 3/26/06 . chapter 3 Good story. Please update! |
| liquid-dreams-139 3/26/06 . chapter 2 hey i like it dude please update! its interesting i wanna know more! |
| lilmissempty 3/26/06 . chapter 2 This is off to a great start. I can't wait to see what happens with them. |
| Limited Edition 3/25/06 . chapter 1 Eh! The ending was really really vocab is good. Some mistakes here and there, nothing major. Awesome descriptions. I vote for posting the next chap! |
| Ben Wuest 3/25/06 . chapter 1 Message: Ok, so I'm not going to lie. That was really, really hott. One of those 'hottest things ever'. You're really good at this, I hope for an update soon, lol. B. Rating: 3/5Comments: It was hott, yes, but there were several grammatical errors, which is a big deal to me. I will continue to read on this if you keep updating, but you should really look over your work before posting next time, ok? |
