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A Midsummer Nights Sacrifice 2006-05-11 . chapter 1
BUAHAAHAHAHA! THAT WAS SO COOL *whiplash sound* I lOve YOU ** TO HIME-SAN AND THEIR WAS MOST DEFINIOTELY SOMETHING WRONG WITH THE COMMENT YOU BETTER NTO BE SUICIDAL OR I'LL KILL YOU *grins*

~Me~
Lily von Rider 2006-03-26 . chapter 1
I

LOVE

IT.

You're so **ign modest -.-

LOVE YA MY LESBIAN BRIDE
indigonoir 2006-03-26 . chapter 1
I do read every one of your poems more than once.

And You, You are my number one, my Love. How therefore, can I release You? The little I know and experience of You, fills me with pride. I look at your photographs every day and every day I long to be with You. Then I show You around; my beautiful daughter.

Ever since the day You were born, You touched my life, as does a Butterfly... with gentle certainty You gave me reason to stay alive. Because of You I fought my demons, rediscovered my dignity and healed my broken spirit. I am no longer afraid that You might be disappointed in a father who was more adept at existing than living. So, I no longer have a reason to hide myself from You. Nor have I any reason to feel ashamed of myself.

Now that I have my voice again, know this…

I NEVER meant to hurt You so deeply with my selfishness. For this the gods will surely punish me... even Prometheus' punishment will appear light by comparison.

Today, I live my dream and desire to share the beauty of being alive with You.

So now, if I have one wish, I would turn back the clock and again come to the front door as I did so many years ago, but this time, I would stay with You. For me it is NEVER to late. PLEASE may I have ONE CHANCE because I desire to take my place by your side?
Paper Bag Ghost 2006-03-25 . chapter 1
... Very emotional... Makes me laugh... My dad's just like this, but I got over the anger and pain a while ago... I grew up in a matter of months and lost years of my childhood so I know how this feels... Parent's can be annouying, eh?
Princess-anna57 2006-03-25 . chapter 1
Wow, emotional. Good poem, well done. I adore the title too! Write on!

~Anna~
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