Reviews for The Price of Falling

Reviews For: The Price of Falling - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

honey splattered brains 2008-09-06 ch 2,	wah. it sounds so awesome. go update. D
stoppingtime 2007-10-21 ch 2,	I like it. Those were two very strong chapters. The idea itself is facsinating. Please continue. If I were you, this is deffinitely a story worth continuing. Please update soon.
eras 2007-09-12 ch 2,	I think that you should continue. It is rather interesting what you have written in only two chapter. If I were you, I would definitely continue it. I really do hope you do though. Even though is been more than a year since you updated I still have some hope that you will update again. Take care Ingrid
xxsuicide 2007-07-13 ch 2,	omg, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! This is realy interesting ;)
xxsuicide 2007-07-13 ch 1,	holy crap, this is really good.
shairimean 2007-04-14 ch 2,	Ah so sue me, I went and read another one of your stories. I couldn't help myself, especially not with this story- it's just so...intriguing, interesting, exciting, original... I love the whole collabration of greek mythology and Lucifer. Mythology is one of my favourite things in the world and imagine seeing it coupled with one of my other high ranking likes: the hot devil. Sigh. Not to mention your writing- which is amazing good here. It's very descriptive but in a good way because most fantasy stories need description. But also the dialogue- which I love. I really liked the just dialogue scenes between Eres and Hermes, I thought it balanced the chapter out really well. I like how this story is more serious than Imagine you and Me- obviously since they fall under different categories. I usually go for the romance/ humor ones but when I find a good fantasy I get esctatic. Especially a good fantasy with a interesting plot line and characters that I find appealing- which I do by the way. I get what you mean when you said the second chapter turned out quite light hearted but I think it really does suit the story. But I suppose if you intended the chapter to be dark- I get what you mean. Anyway I hope you're not going to drastically change anything. I'm revelling in the fantasy plot, now just patiently waiting for the romance to arrive. But patiently, since I don't expect you to jump ahead of the gun and skip the whole progression of the story. ;) I hope I make sense in my reviews by the way. I really like where you are taking the story, the plot is very exciting. You write characters really well, especially their personalities and I like how the main girl is not your average damsel in distress, infact she's quite cruel. I wonder how well they'll match up. Update soon!
YouHadxMe 2007-04-08 ch 2,	Aw, i see that you haven't updated in a while. I hope that you do though, I really like this story and can't wait till we are past the introductions and begin the main conflict. I hope you continue :)
A Quirky Tale 2007-02-17 ch 2,	I'm intrigued already! I love the mixture of biblical references and Greek mythology. But who is Lucifer, anyway? I never heard of him in any mythology. Is he a character you made up?
Salt and Vinegar Pringles 2006-12-21 ch 2,	Awesome! When's Lucifer going to appear? The devil in disguise, eh!? Alright. Fantastic, awesome story!
FuzzyPurpleWatermelons 2006-11-14 ch 2,	Hm, I like it. But do help me here, is this in modern time? OR all the way in Ancient Greece? Anyways, great job and keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter :]
star 2006-09-23 ch 2,	heyy! i love your story...it's really well written...please update!!
Sakura5584 2006-09-05 ch 2,	isn't lucifer and hades the same person? oh and awesome story!
Crewger 2006-09-01 ch 1,	uh kinda waiting for the next chapter here?
foxdance 2006-06-01 ch 1,	I'm in love with mythos, but I've yet to see if you mixed both Greek and biblical characters in a believable manner - too early in the plot to tell. Seeing that you write well (both in both grammar and style), I have a feeling you'll accomplish that magnificently. I'm tossing your story into my favorite stories pile, and crossing my fingers in hopes that you update soon.
Ettenna 2006-05-24 ch 1,	Really interesting and the idea of it all is very captivating...mythology and religion hm...I love mythology and sometimes I find my self seeing religion as mythology but that's just me. Fanatics and narrow-minded people can just go elsewhere. Please do continue its a great start! Thanks...

Return to Top