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| TryNotTo 2007-02-02 ch 1,   | I adore every syllable of this poem. Fantastic work. |
| Whoregasmic 2006-06-24 ch 1, | i love this.i love how at the end you never say what the secret is...everything just stops...great write |
| Jezsh 2006-06-06 ch 1, | I adore the line 'hold your breath when I b r e a t h e'. Zowee! This is gorgeous, I love the extra spaces - the atmosphere of it is electric. |
| oops, heartbreak 2006-05-17 ch 1, | Hey, I'm just reviewing to apoligize for assuming you had an eating disorder. Thanks for explaining it to me, but I guess the reason I really saw it was, well, because when you have an ED, you look for a sense of solidarity everywhere, you know? It's weird, I guess, it's just something I tend to do... Anyway, this poem was really amazing. They're always so well worded, and formatted, and the flow is always amazing. You've got an amazing talent. Thanks,Pumpkin |
| dollface and her cancer 2006-04-24 ch 1, | ...and the static silence at the end is palpable. |
| boys kiss girls 2006-04-05 ch 1, | suspenseful. nice. |
| account not in use 2006-04-02 ch 1, | I do this to much, your brilliant idea of a poem, insert your own secret, and you let us, right after that -is- but i only ever get that far, the words freeze when the panic starts. |
| lackluster 2006-03-31 ch 1, | i adore the idea behind this. brilliant. |
| White Tea and Ginger 2006-03-27 ch 1, | Wow. This is incredible. I loved every line. Keep writing. |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-03-26 ch 1, | I love how lyrical this one - like as I read it, it came so fast like a song. I love the whole divide between words written across you (like looking at a look on someone's face) and the secrets that go with it if only that part of the sentence were legible. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |
| dress her up in fairytales 2006-03-25 ch 1, | ah, very nice. it sent chills down my spine & i love the format of this. it's beautiful work. |
| breezy nostrils 2006-03-25 ch 1, | nice to see you updated. and i love the mystery at the end. so pretty and flowed together so well. |
| she's not breathing 2006-03-25 ch 1, | ohmyGod. your writing is your pen name. that's all i can say. i'm speechless. wow. ~kait |
| xoxoMizzatxoxo 2006-03-25 ch 1, | Very good. Suspenseful. |
| chaos called creation 2006-03-25 ch 1, | i feel like i'm walking around in a daze while reading this. perfect ending, and snags of reality in between. |