Quite an interesting concept for a story...
Immediatly it engrosses you, makes you want to know more, to find out what happens next.
Are you going to write more, or leave it the way it is with such a powerful ending?

Interesting, and quite spooky! I wonder; were they coming for some one she knew? Or were they coming for her...

I love this story *shivers* 5 marshmellows out of 5!