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simpleplan13
2006-04-04
ch 1,
God’s map is has no routes.. no is

I like this... that first line is really powerful and beautifully written... love it
she's not breathing
2006-03-25
ch 1,
i like being simple. it's about words being a knife, having the power to stab & kill (subtly). absolutely amazing, how layered & deep it is. love.

~kait
SliversofSilverPain
2006-03-25
ch 1,
Very strange... I don't understand how it connects to the heading, but the poem itself works very well. It is well written with good imagery.
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