|Reviews for Slice|
| simpleplan13 4/4/06 . chapter 1
God’s map is has no routes.. no is
I like this... that first line is really powerful and beautifully written... love it
| she's not breathing 3/25/06 . chapter 1
i like being simple. it's about words being a knife, having the power to stab & kill (subtly). absolutely amazing, how layered & deep it is. love.
| SliversofSilverPain 3/25/06 . chapter 1
Very strange... I don't understand how it connects to the heading, but the poem itself works very well. It is well written with good imagery.