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| simpleplan13 2006-04-04 ch 1, | God’s map is has no routes.. no is I like this... that first line is really powerful and beautifully written... love it |
| she's not breathing 2006-03-25 ch 1, | i like being simple. it's about words being a knife, having the power to stab & kill (subtly). absolutely amazing, how layered & deep it is. love. ~kait |
| SliversofSilverPain 2006-03-25 ch 1, | Very strange... I don't understand how it connects to the heading, but the poem itself works very well. It is well written with good imagery. |