this one is complicated. i have mixed emotions about it. i get it though. lol

i like the last stanza it ties it together. you've got great flow!

oh god. i can see why. breathtaking. you're on my alerts.

~kait

Wonderful description and depth to the thoughts. Truly beautiful.

This is so wonderful! It's so... light... it's wonderful and although it is deep, it has that vibrant imagery along with it. Well written!