thunderous storm of fire awesome

Oh, that was beautiful. I loved it all the way... until the last line. I think the 'sewer' kinda ruined it for me - the meaning makes sense and I get it, but... maybe pick a... prettier word? Haha... I mean, it was so beautiful, the wording was all so perfect, and then I was waiting for some deep and poignant finish, and then... 'sewer'. But then, that's just me. As a whole, it's brilliant. Thanks for writing it. ^^

~Ally B.

great poem! but I don't understand the last line "There shall be no sewer in your destination"