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Reviews For: Yearbook: Book 1 2002 to 2003

Freaked
2006-05-10
ch 8,
This is awesome! I love it.
waiitiing
2006-05-07
ch 6,
very original story line keep it upPOST SOON
Thunder Goddes Kino
2006-03-28
ch 4,
Heya, it's me, Miss Moss! XDAnyway, I've heard you in your LJ and DA journal raving about this, and now, I finally get to read it! w00t!!

Anyway, tis very good so far! I think Loki and Alex are cute and funny as heck - I keep picturing that drawing of Loki you did (the one I colored) you should draw Alex! Or heck, I could draw you Alex and Loki, because it'd be spiffy ^_^

I also like how you're doing each chapter in one p.o.v, then the next chapter being the other's p.o.v., it adds more interest and lets us see more than what one person can describe through their eyes. ... I don't know if that made sense, forgive me, I'm sleepy, lol.

Keep it up, I want to read more!
doublejeopardy
2006-03-26
ch 4,
wow, I love this, its different. Keep writing.Loki and Alex are adorable.I cant wait to find out what happens next.Keep up the good work.
Miss Anonymous hp
2006-03-26
ch 4,
Ek! I love this! Loki and Alex are adorable... Trixie and Sam are an interesting addition. I really like your writing style and your decision to write the chapters from both point of views. It really helps understand things a little better, and I think I like this style better than when people change point of views but move onto the next topic so that they have to explain what happened with the person before.

Keep up the good work!
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