Cute. Ben has major attitude problems...he reminded me of Yuki from Gravitation. But I love how his behavior changed once he got home to Isiah.

All through this though,I kept having to say "Cooper!" every couple of seconds because of my grandma's ** energetic fluff on legs...it made me feel like I had ADHD or was kind of insane or something...

Anyway, you probably didn't care...I just wrote it. Sorry.

Love xoxo

Ahh I can see you style clearly in this short too! And I still love it!

Your ability to flesh out a character in just a few short comments floors me. I'm so impressed.

Your style is really unique, I've never read anything without much setting that I wasn't annoyed with! But your vivid characters practically create a setting around them that doesn't need to be described. So I forget to tweak about it... lol

Anyway, keep writing, you're doing very well.