Aw.. bute! I'm excited for an update.
I really do like Leon though, he's awesome.
Although what's this otehr person he was hurt by? I'm curious.
lee

Hey Aerina! Cool story so far! Can't wait to read more! I saw your drawings of Ryan, Leon, Kara, and Nikita and loved it! Keep writing.

hurry up with the next chapter already aerina!

~Jynxie~

that was pretty good. i like the rino part! i cant wait for the next chapter.

^_^ I think haiku's likes leon. ^_^ good job! *claps* When will there be more??

lol Yay...^_^ it's good so far Ryuko-Kun!Haiku: *glomps Leon* ^_^

this is interesting story... and in one of your reviews you said you try to keep the readers but not all of your readers (I know I'm one of them)might like how ryan is shuting out leon.how do you intend to make ryan like leon? well don't stop writing this story, aernia

Well you definitly still have my attention with this chapter, I can't wait to see what happens when Ryan figures out who the cat is, lol. I like the character dynamics you have so far, was wondering if you are going to have the story focus mainly on Ryan and Leon or if the whole group will play a major part because if they are I would suggest offering more insight into those secondary characters, either by observation (most likely by Ryan as it offers an outsiders point of view) or changing points of view. Looking forward to the next chapter, keep posting at this rate and I'll love you forever.

I'm surprised to say the least that the story has already been updated! I really am starting to enjoy this a lot. Leon is so interesting. He is kind of out there, and I love that. If you keep on updating like this, you will soon become one of my favorite authors. hehe.

It's ok that you didn't use any of my titles. I like giving help whenever I can. Keep up the great work. Update soon.

Finally! I have actually found a story worth being read. There is so much junk on this website. Your story is much better than most.

I really like your writing style. It is easy to read and imagine. Ryan is also likeable, even though he's a punk for not giving Leon a chance.

As for a title, how about Senses, The Unknown, or Clairvoyance.

I like it. It has potential and I love stories that toy with the paranormal. You still have quite a bit of introductory work to do though so I can't really help you with the title yet. I liked how you introduced what I'm assuming will be the villian of the piece, it grabs the readers attention and helps set up the plot early on in the story. Looking forward to the next chapter.