This is so adorable. Wonderful piece!

~Twilight Starr~

This is incredibly heart felt and sweet. Whoever, if anyone, you wrote this for is very lucky that you feel this way for him. Unless it's a dream girl. I do that too. But your writing is so..I don't know...Great. I love it. It makes me feel light.

I despise love poems, but the imagery here is quite nice actually. The third stanza about sleep was pretty dreamy.