|Reviews for The Monastery|
| clair-a-net 5/24/07 . chapter 14
thats not good. he has to rescue her before something bad happens. Hope he hurries up. good stuff. cant wait to read more.
| cobaine 4/14/07 . chapter 14
OMGoddess! OI! The suspense! I love your style of writing! You are so talented an authress and I can't wait to see chapter fifteen! -
| aferdeity 10/4/06 . chapter 13
I am so happy you have finally upated. it was been a long time! I really can't wait for the next update this is getting too good. :)
| linaeviel 10/3/06 . chapter 13
terrific story, well-written! i was so upset to find that the chapters ended. please keep up the great writing and update soon!
| Galasriniel 10/3/06 . chapter 13
I'm SO glad you decided to write more! I absolutely love this story, by the way. And the funny thing is, I was thinking about this earlier today, wondering when you would write more. And hey! There's more!
Thank you for creating this wonderful story!
| Zara 10/2/06 . chapter 13
Thank you for making my day. I look forward to future updates.
| Find Truth Find Yourself 9/14/06 . chapter 12
I love your story so much. I have not had much of chance to stay online in the past few months. I had so hoped that you had gotten further in it. You've left us hanging. I hope that you haven't given up on this one.
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 7/25/06 . chapter 12
yea she picked well but i so didnt expect that at the end how he walked past them and got his arrows. wonder what hes up to? hm. guess ill have to keep reading!
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 7/25/06 . chapter 11
well this is getting interesting. i wonder what she is up to and what she knows that no one else does.
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 7/25/06 . chapter 10
this is getting good! cant wait to read more! sorry its taken me so long to finish but i moved so i didnt have the internet for a while but now i do! hehe
| Galasriniel 6/14/06 . chapter 12
okay, totally awesome so far! i love it so much... i honestly can't wait for more, so PLEASE update soon!
| Ivory-Dragon14 5/7/06 . chapter 12
hmm . . . i'm confused, but curious. i really like John, but Elena is somewhat creepy. then again, skipping kinda scares me in anyone over the age of 6. update.
| aferdeity 5/7/06 . chapter 12
so this is getting interesting but you have a lot of things to tie togther it just gets more and more weird.
| starrynight04 5/7/06 . chapter 12
I am a little confused as to why all of this is happening but nevertheless I am happy that you updated. I cannot wait to see how you unravel this portion of the story.
| Falcon Bertille 5/3/06 . chapter 8
Another fantastic pair of chapters!
John's "dream" about shooting the arrows while blindfolded was an interesting bit of forshadowing. I can only guess what great task lies before him. And the way you described the bow, and the arrow, and the process of shooting - I've never shot a bow and arrow before, but the details you gave and the terminology you used made the scene really vivid for me. The way you wrote it made it seem "right", made me believe that you really knew what you were talking about.
I also loved the way you wrote about Elsie's experience when she channelled divine power in order to heal Glenn. The image of Arturiel standing beside her, sheltering her with his wings, was absolutely gorgeous. You really captured the right mixture of awe, joy, and sadness.
On a more humorous note, I really enjoyed Wilhelm's flashback about giving Grafnon a bug to hold, which Grafnon promptly put in his mouth. "Wilhelm figured that the bug had been tasty." LOL!
Hopefully, soon, I'll be all caught up!