Cool... I like the idea and the rhymes...

And about your comment to Bleeding:I'm not suicidal Goddamit! I'm not! I'm just synicaly depressed theirs a difference! *runs around wildly waving arms*

Me

I stab you in the back

I am worse than the devil

Love it.

Fuck you for being brillaint -.-

(I still love ya)

I was once a christian (not by will).But I realized what I wanted to believe, and I supoose it classified me as an Athiest. So there's relation to this poem from me.

8 out of 10

Harsh, but well-written. I'm a christian, so I have an idea of why you wrote this poem. I have a few "christian" friends... but they aren't christian unless their with my youth group(A group of christian teens). It's pretty annoying. This poem describes them perfectly. Good job!