|Reviews for The Waiting Room|
| Eire Rain 3/31/06 . chapter 7
This chapter was incredibly sad. Just bittersweet I guess.
I was glad she didn't say she loved him back. I think that would have deffinetely taken something away from her character.
I sense that her mother is *really* not going to be happy with Evelyn's relationship with a boy she met in rehab, of all places. lol.
I am really loving this. Can't wait for another update.
| kjnhgtfrdefgh 3/31/06 . chapter 7
This is really friggen good. I can't wait for more.
| Eire Rain 3/30/06 . chapter 6
Yeah, I started reading this a few days ago but I didn't comment because, like you said in your email, I wanted to be "caught up". I'm really glad you are benefiting from my review! I just give the kind of reviews that I like to receive. Thoughtful ones. Not "upd8 soon or I kill you in your sleep! teehee".
Ah I can't believe he said he loves her. That's so sweet. I really liked this chapter. In fact, it was my favorite one. The other ones were pretty fast, but this one slowed down and I got some more insight into the other characters (especially Cadance). I love that name by the way. This chapter went at a really, really good pace, and I hope you keep this pace throughout the rest of the story because it is very slow and comfortable and sweet. If that makes sense. lol.
Yeah I can deffinetely tell that the relationship with her mom is going to be a huge deal. I mean, it already is. I sense a confrontation between the two of them, and I honestly hope Evelyn can get out those feelings she has about her (and stop blaming herself).
Okay, this is getting super long and I am gonna be late for class so I'd better go. :) Can't wait for another update.
| Eire Rain 3/29/06 . chapter 5
Hey! Your story was recommended to me (more than once). hehe. So I decided to read it. And I am really glad I did. This is great!
Josh and Evelyn are really sweet. I love their flirting and nervousness. I also love the shared darkness of their pasts (the drug addictions and the mother issues). I like how their mothers are such important characters in their lives, but so completely opposite of each other. It's like the same pain coming from two very different sources.
I only have one criticism. It seemed like they got addicted really, really fast. I assume you were trying to speed up that part of the story to get to the real meat of the plot (trust me, I am guilty of this too). But I think if you slowed it down it would seem more real.
But other than that, things are going along at a good pace. The plot has me hooked. This is going on my faves list and my author alert list. lol. I hardly ever read anything on FP, so I get really excited when I find a good story! Update soon (even though you are updating at a turbo-speed rate right now! _)
| BetterbyDesign 3/29/06 . chapter 1
I am so ecstatic that you brought my ALL TIME FAVORITE story back to Fictionpress! I read this story when you first posted it on the website, and I must say, after reading the first chapter, I am thoroughly impressed. It's so difficult to find stories nowadays that have, to some degree, such a profound impact on readers (especially those like me who crave for new ways to procrastinate). I cannot wait to see the "new" story and see where it all goes.
| square root 3/28/06 . chapter 4
o... love at first sight, hmm?
| mudonthetires 3/28/06 . chapter 2
I read this last night and I am hooked. I'm glad you've got more on your website, which means I don't have to wait for you to update here :D
| square root 3/27/06 . chapter 3
uh-oh. Josh's into drugs to escape from his mother, and Evelyn is trying to escape from her life? And now they're both in the hospital. I'm guessing that they'll meet soon.
| Heather F. C 3/27/06 . chapter 1
OMG! You are back and so is the story! I am so glad that i'll be read it and cry all over once again, lol.. welcome back :D
| dwilivia 3/27/06 . chapter 2
I was awaiting the day when this would finally be up again. Turns out, today was my lucky day.
Hope you churn out Covet and World Apart too! ((: