Lovely, lots of feeling in this piece. You express yourself well. Straightforward, less complex (or as some call it "dense") then some other pieces but the nature of the material is such that it doesn't really have to be. My only suggestions really are to experiment with styles and methods of writing, especially how you write your poems. Expand your horizons and really find out what works for you as a poet. It's about finding your stride, what lets you express yourself the most freely and effectively.

On the subject matter I have this to say, a simple but difficult lesson we all must learn, you only truly care about one person at the end of the day. And infatuation, false love, these things are insidious. Also remember that the beginning of every relationship is always the best part. It's whether or not the relationship stays meaningful and really has value that merits whether or not to keep it. Do not sacrifice something strong and established and beautiful for a whim. And most importantly of all, be 120% honest with yourself. That's the most important thing. Don't think you feel a certain way, know you feel a certain way. And don't let your feelings cloud your reasoning. Because mind, heart, and soul must all be in harmony. Best of luck and keep on writing!

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Powerful and passionate, well displayed.Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.