=) well, it does sound a lot like you were on drugs, but that's okay, because all kinds of artists are on drugs and some of them are super famous. I don't know what I get out of it, except that your words just paint pictures in my mind; the imagery is great. And it has an air of sadness to it, like a fight that will never end. So maybe it's a lot like life, in a drugged up way. anyways. the end.

This is sorta cool. A lot of cliche imagery so I'm thinking you could just pull a thesaurus out and the piece would really fill in. Good stuff.