|Reviews for In the Smoky Haze|
| Anya Mannequin 5/6/06 . chapter 1
you take my breath away
| MagikMelody 3/28/06 . chapter 1
wow. it is written extremly well and there is very much emotion behind it. awesome
| SuperNovaNess 3/27/06 . chapter 1
Definetly your best poem yet. But shouldn't the line "The panic increases where is" have some form of punctuation in it?
Unless you don't want it to, in which case, it's fine, since in poetry you can do whatever the heck you want.