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| Complications 2008-11-23 ch 28, | Hi, I've already commented on the last chapter ages back. Just wanted to say That I -for one- am still looking forward to the next chapter. and don't worry about chemistries remark about plagrism. You strong is very strongly influenced by the world inyuasha (spelling?) but none of you characters or plot is. If you do want to write fanfiction there is a sister site to this - Just let me know what your user name is. PLEASE UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY |
| Nephilim Familiar 2008-10-07 ch 29, | Love the story beyond measure :) Katashi is just awesome and I can't help but feel that some of your characters has similar characteristics to some in Inuyasha, such as Sesshomaru and Miroku. Don't matter but I still wanted to inform you just in case :) Can't wait for more of your amazing story. Sincerely Nephilim Familiar |
| Ice and Snow 2008-05-26 ch 29, | it's been half a year =D...continue soon! |
| Gerber 2008-05-02 ch 1, | Please please please update. It's been so long.. Your story is one of my favorites. Please. |
| midnightdream-5 2008-03-05 ch 29, | thats so mean you know! in the next chap (which u better update soon - hint hint) Cyri and Katashi had better meet back up and ooh i so cant wait so hurry! go on chop chop get to it lol. And omg to her mum! it will be interesting to her more about her... but more importantly Cyri and Katashi 2getha again lol kat x |
| midnightdream-5 2008-03-04 ch 28, | stop killing her off! lol poor Cyri and omg her mum!? omg omg omg omg lol damn it i cant exactl read nemore... but still i must try lol kat x |
| midnightdream-5 2008-03-04 ch 27, | wow loving the chapter you know your writing has got so much better after each chapter your decrsibing things in more detail (not that you weren't good before) :) cant wait to read more hehe kat x |
| atreyu love 2008-01-23 ch 29, | OHMY. why hasnt there been an update in FOREVER? well, not forever.. but about three months? EHH? i love the story :) and im SURE that other ppl love it too. and i wanna see more with her and Katashi!! whats gonna happen with her SHORT mortal life, compared to his LONG ... ten thousand year life? lol. PLEASE UPDATE! |
| atreyu love 2008-01-22 ch 20, | i love this story :) and i hope she doesnt die!! i love Katashi :) |
| atreyu love 2008-01-22 ch 16, | oh my :( she almost died. and hes in love with her!! and shes mortal.. not long to live. |
| atreyu love 2008-01-22 ch 8, | OMG. i hope he falls in love with her :) |
| atreyu love 2008-01-22 ch 3, | i like it :) |
| 144 2007-11-13 ch 29, | OH EM GEE. Long time, no communication, eh? Your first reviewer has been unfaithful :( And I still haven't read the rest of the story. BUT I WILL. After I get my full eight hours of sleep. Life, you know? How's yours been? |
| Chemistry 2007-11-10 ch 7, | Eh...At first the story was alright, but after I read the obvious Inuyasha reference, I must admit I was sorely disappointed. This is supposed to be an original fiction story, is it not? Plagiarism is NOT appreciated. |
| complicatons 2007-11-08 ch 29, | hi, I've been to lazy to log in, because i'm not on my computer. I really liked this chapter to be honest. I just wish it was longer. can't wait for the next one. I wouldn't worry about the past chapter at the moment if I was in your shoes, because these new ones more than make up for them, and the story is clearly captivating from the beging. I'm not sure about Cyri's mother, I think she needs to be subtly in the story, but I don't think they can have to many more confrontations... you know maybe she should write cyri a letter or just something? Idk. anyway. thanks for a great update... hope the next one comes soon :-) p.s: Katashi's coming! YAY! |