 YasuRan 2009-03-17 . chapter 1It's been a long time since I've read anything as witty as this on the site. Good job! |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-02-06 . chapter 1"My Best Friend's Wedding" is one of my favorite movies...totally hilarious.
Anyway, I liked this! The weird order of the stages really was amusing. Nice job. |
 Beautiful Green Eyed Angel 2009-01-24 . chapter 1I liked it. Really good humor there, and nice storyline. It's very amusing to read, and I liked it a lot. I think I said that before, but I'm pretty sure you like hearing that. But then again, you'd probably want to know WHY I like it, because that's what authors are like. So I like it because I appreciate good humor, and also because it is true. Except not for all people, I mean, some people have just one stage for a really long time. I swear this is one original piece (at least I think it is). Love you! |
 Stylo 2008-03-23 . chapter 1Haha!!
This one's hilarious :).
It doesn't matter that it's short; brevity is the soull of wit after all. And it takes a really smart writer to take a good idea and know that it wouldn't work as a chaptered story, but write one-shots with it.
All in all, great job. I found it vastly amusing :) |
 LadyLush 2007-08-10 . chapter 1lol that was cute
x |
 luv me like no other 2007-05-19 . chapter 1Once again, you make hopeless romantics smile. I think i'm in love with your stories. |
 Orangen 2007-01-18 . chapter 1I found the descriptions of each "stage" to be pretty amusing, heh. |
 elisefey 2006-12-29 . chapter 1That ending line was perfect. |
 You Are So Last Summer 2006-10-25 . chapter 1wow, i really liked this piece! first of all, the topic was very interesting. stages of moving on, i enjoyed the creative twist on that. second of all, i like the title. i also like how it's very well-written. and third of all, that cole thing came out of nowhere, and was a pleasant surprise. i thought the whole cole and her thing all in itself was pretty adorable. funny how i can like a person in just one line, that "well, finally" drawl. nice one-shot! :)
xoxo, grL |
 Moonstorm101 2006-04-20 . chapter 1Great one shot! I've read heaps that've just been completely rushed in order to MAKE them a one shot but this one is just perfect: nice length, nice writing style and TRUE! Well done! |
 chthonical 2006-03-28 . chapter 1I love your ability to write one-shots that are just right. In fact, your ability to write decent one-shots at ALL is pretty amazing.
Of course, I'd have loved to see the extended version of this, but I loved that last part anyway. It seems to sum up the whole story quite nicely.
*wants more* |
 Crazy Biene 2006-03-27 . chapter 1hey,gr8 job btw. I just gott outta a relationnship too and it was rather okayy...I went through some of the stages, but i din't hurt the guy, lol.
=B= |