WoW!! Was the chapter shorter? Hadn't noticed as i was so totally absorbed in it. 'Good' you ask? Honey, the word 'good' doesn't begin to describe it. It's better than good. It's..It's.. Wow! (for a lack of a better word.) You have done a super fantastic job with the characters. You make them seem real and believeable.The reader feels every emotion that is put forth by them. Wow! (did i say that already?) Keep it up and feed this junkies need for more. -Scottie

I realize that it's been a little while since you have worked on this...but dont' stop now. You have such talent...and you are leaving us hanging (in a matter of speaking). Good luck with the writing!

I know this is only the second chapter of the story, but i must say, You have a very wonderful talent and way of using just the mix right words to describe a persons emotions and facial features in this story. Well done! You've also gotten me to feel sympathetic for Ty...not always an easy feat for an author your age to do...he's gotten under my skin... and i feel that i am geniunely conserned for him when i read this. Man your good!

i really like your story. alot/. :D

Ahaha...Hee, I like how him and his other self are talking to each other at the end...Heehee, I do that ALL the time! Good job again, and I can't wait for the update!

God bless!

W4J

Wow! Another new story! How do you have time for all of these?!?

Well, anyways, I really liked this, expecially the strange twist at the end. I like how Ty didn't do anything as Jocelyn hurt him...kinda like Jesus...we can say bad things to him and about him, but he still loves us the same...

Liked a lot, and keep up the good work! Can't wait for more!

God bless

W4J