|Reviews for Life|
| Luny Loona 9/28/07 . chapter 1
Okay, so it's a bit short. I like the last line the best :)
| TorrentalRain 1/5/07 . chapter 1
I love your poem. It's rare to find a poem so short that is both beautiful and wise. Your poem speaks of a truth many try to deny. Keep writing!
| Ellesmere 5/22/06 . chapter 1
Very philosophical, as life itself is. I've always had trouble myself understanding and defining what life really is. But i think you did a pretty awesome job of it. I really like your writing and i hope you continue. Look forward 2 reading more)
| Needa S 4/21/06 . chapter 1
True! Beautifully done.
| Jason J. Ross 4/7/06 . chapter 1
| SeaVoi 4/3/06 . chapter 1
This poem is nothing but the truth, i like.
| Time To Change 3/31/06 . chapter 1
yep everything that happens in life is a matter of cause and consequence... but everyone has a choice. thanks for all your reviews :)
| classic violet 3/29/06 . chapter 1
"The smallest shimmer of light is life sweetly embracing you."
Too true. Very good job.
| Hax Rook 3/28/06 . chapter 1
of yours i've read, my favorite. watch spelling (breath-breathe) for stronger presentation. thoughtful and not overcooked. don't see value in the author's notes - let your stuff speak with its own voice. short and nice.
| Arael the 15th 3/27/06 . chapter 1
Short and sweet. I enjoyed this little poem very much. Continue writing!
| fairEtales 3/27/06 . chapter 1
Aw! That is so cute! What a wonderful message! Thx for the review!
| xHannahx 3/27/06 . chapter 1
surely it should be "every breath you breathe", and the last line doesnt seem to fit rhythm-wise, but other than that i really like this. gd stuff.
| Dante's Disciple 3/27/06 . chapter 1
I like the message here, especially in the last two lines there. I also read a couple of your other poems, As Darkness Falls and Dark Moon- and they were awesome, nice work :)
| eden is burning 3/27/06 . chapter 1
Aw.. very sweet and pretty
| MidnightStar005 3/27/06 . chapter 1
The path that you choose to tread will always be your decision.