Okay, so it's a bit short. I like the last line the best :)

I love your poem. It's rare to find a poem so short that is both beautiful and wise. Your poem speaks of a truth many try to deny. Keep writing!

Very philosophical, as life itself is. I've always had trouble myself understanding and defining what life really is. But i think you did a pretty awesome job of it. I really like your writing and i hope you continue. Look forward 2 reading more)

Ellesmere

True! Beautifully done.

Great advice!

This poem is nothing but the truth, i like.

yep everything that happens in life is a matter of cause and consequence... but everyone has a choice. thanks for all your reviews :)

"The smallest shimmer of light is life sweetly embracing you."

Too true. Very good job.

of yours i've read, my favorite. watch spelling (breath-breathe) for stronger presentation. thoughtful and not overcooked. don't see value in the author's notes - let your stuff speak with its own voice. short and nice.

Short and sweet. I enjoyed this little poem very much. Continue writing!

Aw! That is so cute! What a wonderful message! Thx for the review!

surely it should be "every breath you breathe", and the last line doesnt seem to fit rhythm-wise, but other than that i really like this. gd stuff.

Han.

I like the message here, especially in the last two lines there. I also read a couple of your other poems, As Darkness Falls and Dark Moon- and they were awesome, nice work :)

Aw.. very sweet and pretty

The path that you choose to tread will always be your decision.