Bravo to Revolution!

Fluid. Catchy.

It easily charms the reader into de-glorifying the monarch, which is exactly what is intended.

Hahaha very funny :) I can just see sailors singing it while they clink their mugs of disgusting "ale" together :D

hahaha, very nice! Awesome rhythm and rhyming! Stories in poetry form are great, good job D

good poem. It made me laugh silently to myself a couple times. The fact that Louis was so sinful made him seem like a funny character. It makes me wonder if he is based on King Louis of France back hundreds of years ago.

There were some grammer mistakes, though. You mispelled Spoiled in the 4th stanza, among others.

Anyways, it was a nice, funny poem.

The last verse has an it out, " But now he was a dead King too!"

is he still dead? was he dead, and now he's not?

anyways, very nicely constructed, although it has a predictable ending.

the rhymes are generally good, but im keener on perfect ones.

good job overall.

This is one of the best poems I have read so far. Great Job!

xoxo