Beautiful!

This is a beautiful piece. Really, quite extraordinary. I felt loss and melancholy from this. You're really a great poet. ^^

It's been a while since I've reviewed something of yours... I guess I was in the mood today for some professional poetry. LOL As usual, this portrays exquisite talent and a mangificent use of language to weave verses of beauty and heart-felt emotion. I love this poem especially, it's so dark and somber, and so deep. I loved it so very much, the flow and rhyming was so well done. I truly think you're as good as any professional poet, and not just the teenaged fictionpress writers who write emo free verses and stuff. Magnificent, wonderful work!

wow that was really really good. i could vividly see everything. there was a perfect picture painted in my mind. i loved it. this is going in my favorits.

Keep writing! Ame

Such an excellent snapshot of a scene and a moment with the benifit of a sintilating insight. Lovely work.

Oo! I love this one, it's very beautiful. At first I thought it was going to be the standard gothic poetry that you'd find in the back of a spiral bound notebook, but as I read on I found this conception to be false. Keep writing!