This is amazing! It can relate to so many different moments in almost any person's life, mine for sure. I love the way that you use love like a sister, for too many people seem to use it and I don't think they understand that we wish they were lying or they most likely are;trying to make up something so they "don'y hurt your feelings", thinking that we are week.

"Like I hardly exist"

That line can sum up my life if thought about deeply enough, for reasons I am sure you understand perfectly well. I have no words left to say but well written, well written indeed!

As Always,

Eve

This was better then some of your other poetry, it had a very good flow to it. Nice job, keep writing.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.

"Wherever you are,in you beautiful oblivion"

Love that line :D excellent poem!