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Reviews For: Breaking Down
FrostedTeardrop 2006-03-28 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem, there seems to be so much pain. Great job!
Sable Raen 2006-03-27 . chapter 1
This is the first time I've really read poems when I've been bored and online...I liked it. I empathized with the narrator (presumably you), I felt like I had felt the same thing once before. Nice job, nice organization.
the Stranger in the moonlight 2006-03-27 . chapter 1
I'm so sorry that this guy hurt yous so much, that all you fo is write about him.

This was pretty good, though you have written better.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.
Anecdotes Of The Arcane 2006-03-27 . chapter 1
Damn, very emotional. Beautifully written, a great piece :D
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