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Nemonus 2006-12-19 . chapter 1
Nice. Heaven in Windows Media Player, lol! That's inspired. I like some lines of this one a lot; "I do not know what is happening, but I have an idea." (for its implications, calmly), "The walls are color.". Pretty good rhythm etc. and only some of the description is cliche. Good.
Needa S 2006-03-31 . chapter 1
Beautiful, excellent write. God Bless you and keep on writing.
Adonia Chesser 2006-03-27 . chapter 1
A darn good poem.
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