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| xHannahx 2006-03-28 ch 1, | hmm.. i like this, its uncear as to what the "cold" is, it could either be a blade or something similar, or just the feel of a cold watch - that kinda fit with the waiting idea. i do like the ambiguity, means people can read different things into it and you can really get into their head. with so few words! nice job. Han. |
| Anecdotes Of The Arcane 2006-03-27 ch 1, | HAH! Again, straight to the point. Dramatic, especially the end. Great job! |