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Reviews For: It's Not a Movie

xHannahx
2006-03-28
ch 1,
hmm.. i like this, its uncear as to what the "cold" is, it could either be a blade or something similar, or just the feel of a cold watch - that kinda fit with the waiting idea. i do like the ambiguity, means people can read different things into it and you can really get into their head. with so few words! nice job.

Han.
Anecdotes Of The Arcane
2006-03-27
ch 1,
HAH! Again, straight to the point. Dramatic, especially the end. Great job!
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