 roast beef 2008-04-21 . chapter 1WOW *sigh* A dream come true! ...That'd be the day... |
 Meadowcroft 2007-09-08 . chapter 1Hmm... I think you're a fan. XD |
 Laurel 2006-04-01 . chapter 1 this is a really good story it ssucked me incompletely but the only thing i thought was just a little w.e. about is is in the first paragraphwhere u say apply makeup i woundn't have uses apply fo rthat word...but ireally like it |
 Vernie 2006-03-27 . chapter 1 OMG, that was great! I haven't laughed that hard for awhile! Especially the ending. teeheeheeI saw a pic of Johnny depp today in a magazine with his shirt off. OMG is that hot. |
 Simon James 2006-03-27 . chapter 1ah, comedy :) laughter is the best medicine. |