This is exactly why I'm an athiest, but otherwise great story

Wow, sequel or not, thanks for writing this one. A perfect view into the life of a girl in that position I think.

Beautiful story you wrote.

I absolutely LOVED THIS STORY! You are very talented, please keep writing!

Wow, that was good! I am, as we speak, wiping tears from my eyes.

aw the baby's finally gonna be born i luv ur story its adorable and i love destry lol.

That was so amazing and I loved it, but I feel bad that her father never accepted her again even years after the fact. That made me mad because so many people are like that and completely refuse to love someone like that. People like that are the ones that are truly going to hell. I had a miscarrage so I needed some relief from my emotional scars, you did a good job easing my pain...

I just found your story and it's really good. Ty's a jackass. Well off to read the rest.
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I can't stop smiling! This story made me tear up so many times! It was so adorable and sweet and touching...I"m NOT going to cry! *hugs the writer ferociously*

I loved it. And I completely fell in love with Destry's character. Too bad more men in the world aren't like him, right? This kind of made me wish I had written it, no lie. Keep it up!

I like it! I just think the relationship started a bit early. When I write, I tend to draw things out more. It's just my style, and I'm used to it. Great writing though. I liked the description of Lucy and Destry's first kiss. :)

Katie

i just discovered your story,
and i completely LOVED it!
it fit right in with the way i think about how people are, and how they should treat each other.
plus, you write very well! :d which made it that much better! :D

Wow - I just read the whole thing start to finish, so it must be pretty good! :)

Great story. I'm not sure you wrapped up all the loose ends (like her father...) but that's what sequels are for, right? It was a little cliched (but all romances are...). There were a couple spelling things that could have easily been fixed by running a spellchecker, but not too bad overall. The only other fault (if you can call it that) that really comes to mind is that I think you dropped the Christian theme that you started out with - I might have done some more with that.

These are all only minor quibbles, though.

I think you did a great job on Lucy's character development - by the end of the story she had definitely changed, but at no point in the story did I think it seemed forced.

Very nice!

IT'S OVER?!?!?! What if it's not allowed to be? I really hope you do make a sequel...idk what could happen in it? but that's your problem, not mine :P Anyways. The only problem I found was that her parents were awfully quick to accept her back into the family. I mean, sure, 4 years had gone by, but still...idk. I think you should have them missing from the wedding, even if it would suck for Lucy. But oh well. It's still a really cute story. Great job.
-Megan

Oh gosh, it's over? D:
Well, a sequel sounds great!