Hey Si Lennite--i liked the story of Calais--though it lacks the typical tragic flaw (where complications and more tales arise from). i loved the part that says that Calais still cries for each human that dies. i suggest the development of conflicts between her children (deities) and her tears (mortals). This could be the start of a great mythological saga. May the Lord smile on you wherever you may go.

Interesting concept

This is a good story. I like how you rework the tears in at the end again.

wow... this is really really good...

the way you started it... is it just the start?

either way, its truly unique and truly amazing!

love it!