its good but it will be better if u add a reason after each "dare" like "Dare to feel, the deepest concern." so it will be better and people wont really realize the repitition...this is the trick i used..lolz...just a suggestion though...but i like it...

Okay, I have to say I think I may favor this one over everything else I've read from you(and thats a ** pot full). I love the message! The repetitions are great! Imay even have to favorite it! If I feel so generous :3!

Your friend was here lol. I luved it^.^ It touched me O.O;

I love this it's real...

I like your poem. It's inspirational but I think it's a little too repetitive...just a little. But anyway, I really like it.

far too stoned ans all the repetition made me feel like you were an SAS drill sargeant shouting instructions at me, lol.

not a bad thing though, considering the content... such a nice, positive message and that certainly deserves credit.